pros- I really like how you squashed the character when it jumps up from being surprised, this really helps explain what emotions your character is experiencing.
cons- I have to agree with Taber on this one. you should switch which shoulder your character is opening the door with. preferably the right shoulder since that is the direction that your door swings.
your door seems as if it's to fast or it doesn't swing back far enough after the impact of hitting the wall.
pros-
ReplyDeleteI really like how you squashed the character when it jumps up from being surprised, this really helps explain what emotions your character is experiencing.
cons-
I have to agree with Taber on this one. you should switch which shoulder your character is opening the door with. preferably the right shoulder since that is the direction that your door swings.
your door seems as if it's to fast or it doesn't swing back far enough after the impact of hitting the wall.